introducing
introducing fall
in the playground
under the clouds-
colorful piles of jackets
in the lost and found box
posted by J. Andrew Lockhart at Wednesday, September 13, 2006
A collection of haiku, senryu, tanka, haibun, haiga and other work celebrating the season of autumn as it unfolds.
posted by J. Andrew Lockhart at Wednesday, September 13, 2006
1 Comments:
Hi Andrew,
I really like the lost jackets connecting with autumn colors!
I haven't been writing much tanka, but doesn't your beginning feel a bit heavy?
I can't help wondering about "autumn leaves" etc. for line 1...could be just me!
:-)
Lary
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