Thursday, August 17, 2006

my vision

my vision,
altered by fog
in the cool morning
sending my thoughts
from summer to fall

6 Comments:

Blogger Yansidara said...

beautiful poem. i can't wait for fall either, its my favorite season :)

Thu Aug 17, 05:56:00 am GMT  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

thanks :)

Thu Aug 17, 12:49:00 pm GMT  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

I love the aura of ambiguity that emanates from this tanka. Beautiful and mysterious.

Fri Aug 18, 06:47:00 pm GMT  
Blogger Aurora said...

Nicely done, Andrew.:)

Fri Aug 18, 10:13:00 pm GMT  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

Thank you both --- Aurora, you're making me dizzy by changing your photo so often! :)

Sat Aug 19, 06:48:00 am GMT  
Blogger laryalee said...

I recognize this feeling, Andrew...a fine tanka!
:-)
Lary

Sat Aug 19, 10:34:00 pm GMT  

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