my vision
my vision,
altered by fog
in the cool morning
sending my thoughts
from summer to fall
posted by J. Andrew Lockhart at Thursday, August 17, 2006
Thursday, August 17, 2006
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5 Comments:
beautiful poem. i can't wait for fall either, its my favorite season :)
I love the aura of ambiguity that emanates from this tanka. Beautiful and mysterious.
Nicely done, Andrew.:)
Thank you both --- Aurora, you're making me dizzy by changing your photo so often! :)
I recognize this feeling, Andrew...a fine tanka!
:-)
Lary
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