Thursday, August 03, 2006

shorter days...
the color in a leaf
in the soil

longer nights...
the color in a leaf
in the soil

Playing with the difference
in the two versions... ;-)


Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like these both! Now if you're going to make it hard to choose.....:)

Thu Aug 03, 11:28:00 pm GMT  
Blogger Poetry by Kai said...


Fri Aug 04, 12:52:00 am GMT  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I like them both!

Fri Aug 04, 06:27:00 am GMT  
Blogger Lynne said...

Hi Lary - if it was mine I think I'd go for 'shorter days', as I tend to be aware of the days shortening as autumn progresses, and then more aware of the long nights once winter sets in.

Fri Aug 04, 11:17:00 am GMT  
Blogger polona said...

both are nice. slightly different connotation, though...

Fri Aug 04, 07:01:00 pm GMT  
Blogger laryalee said...

Thanks, Aurora (sorry about the choice, lol!),
and Kai and Andrew -- glad you enjoyed them.

Lynne, I like your reasoning...and while longer nights
also indicate shorter days, the emphasis is different.

Thanks, Polona...I often find it difficult to decide!


Fri Aug 04, 09:26:00 pm GMT  

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