posted by Ashi at Thursday, September 21, 2006
Thursday, September 21, 2006
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6 Comments:
This is great. The vowel sounds make the words almost edible - I want to keep saying them over and over.
Great job!
love the last line.
I like this, Ashi. I would take out "hidden" though.
Thanks jem, natalia, kai and aurora (I'll take your suggestion under consideration)
well done, ashi!
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