Thursday, September 21, 2006


6 Comments:

Blogger jem said...

This is great. The vowel sounds make the words almost edible - I want to keep saying them over and over.

Thu Sep 21, 11:06:00 am GMT  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Great job!

Thu Sep 21, 02:14:00 pm GMT  
Blogger Poetry by Kai said...

love the last line.

Thu Sep 21, 07:48:00 pm GMT  
Blogger Aurora said...

I like this, Ashi. I would take out "hidden" though.

Fri Sep 22, 03:07:00 am GMT  
Blogger Ashi said...

Thanks jem, natalia, kai and aurora (I'll take your suggestion under consideration)

Fri Sep 22, 09:04:00 am GMT  
Blogger polona said...

well done, ashi!

Fri Sep 22, 09:05:00 pm GMT  

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