Saturday, August 19, 2006

the cold autumn wind
scatters the old leaves
in the family photo
her face is slowly
slowly fading

Vic Gendrano


Blogger laryalee said...

Hi Vic!
This is a wistful and lovely tanka...I guess autumn is a time for such thoughts, and this brings a sigh...

Sun Aug 20, 03:47:00 am GMT  
Blogger Yansidara said...

This is just too beautiful!
I love it!

Mon Aug 21, 06:50:00 am GMT  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Beautiful and subtle.
Love this tanka!

Mon Aug 21, 01:51:00 pm GMT  
Blogger shanna baldwin-moore.... hawaiian haiku said...

hey vic what a wonderful tanka...

Tue Aug 22, 01:14:00 am GMT  
Blogger Ashi said...

Fascinating thoughts succession

Fri Aug 25, 08:33:00 pm GMT  

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