A pretty nice day in autumn (Haiku)
A pretty nice day
One thing is missing
Not a leaf falls yet---
Autumn is waiting
For us take a walk
On red leaves----
He rakes the leaves
Off the sidewalk
While the trees wave goodbyes
blowing in
the winds of dancing leaves
the trees had gone nude
~
©2006 kai croft
One thing is missing
Not a leaf falls yet---
Autumn is waiting
For us take a walk
On red leaves----
He rakes the leaves
Off the sidewalk
While the trees wave goodbyes
blowing in
the winds of dancing leaves
the trees had gone nude
~
©2006 kai croft
posted by Kai at Saturday, August 05, 2006
5 Comments:
I hate to be pedantic but surely the plural of haiku is haiku?
Also it really should be "He rakes" and "trees have"
I can see these, Kai! Especially the red leaves.:)
ok thanks
The first one is mt favorite--
Hi Kai,
I like the sounds and visuals....
a lovely set!
:-)
Lary
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