Saturday, August 05, 2006

A pretty nice day in autumn (Haiku)

A pretty nice day
One thing is missing
Not a leaf falls yet---

Autumn is waiting
For us take a walk
On red leaves----

He rakes the leaves
Off the sidewalk
While the trees wave goodbyes

blowing in
the winds of dancing leaves
the trees had gone nude

~
©2006 kai croft

6 Comments:

Blogger Zyzzyz said...

I hate to be pedantic but surely the plural of haiku is haiku?

Also it really should be "He rakes" and "trees have"

Sat Aug 05, 09:35:00 pm GMT  
Blogger texas haijin said...

haiku is haiku in plural.

Sat Aug 05, 11:25:00 pm GMT  
Blogger Aurora said...

I can see these, Kai! Especially the red leaves.:)

Sat Aug 05, 11:29:00 pm GMT  
Blogger Poetry by Kai said...

ok thanks

Sat Aug 05, 11:49:00 pm GMT  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

The first one is mt favorite--

Sun Aug 06, 05:32:00 am GMT  
Blogger laryalee said...

Hi Kai,
I like the sounds and visuals....
a lovely set!
:-)
Lary

Tue Aug 08, 12:21:00 am GMT  

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